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06/17/12
This was very clever, I really enjoyed the "wrap-up" with the MC's epiphany. Thanks...God bless~
06/21/12
This is a beautiful devotion. I think it would be perfect for a children's devotion book or magazine. You had a Bible verse that is a perfect fit for your message. Then you started off with a story many people can understand. The kids who are fortunate enough to not to have to worry about water supply would be educated about how some kids in other countries do have to walk miles to get a supply of water. Then you apply the Biblical message and end with a lovely prayer. I think you have quite a knack for writing children's devotions.