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Indeed, God is powerful in all His ways. Thank you for sharing this encouraging story of God's care. He deals with us individually in love and compassion. Blessings!
06/17/12
Nicely written. I enjoyed this touching piece. Thank you. God bless~
This is a touching but all true story. Parents and grandparents think by giving a child everything they are doing what is best. However they are doing what makes them feel better in the moment. handing out money relieves the guilt for just a bit. As you pointed out tough love does work and there is a reason why it's called tough love.

I'd encourage you to get a proofreader or4 someone who can read the story out loud because there are spots where you're missing a little word. If you don't have anyone (check the message boards) at the very least, leave the story alone for a day or two and then you read it aloud.

You did a great job of taking me through this sad story. I'm glad it had a happy ending. As I type this I'm praying for all of the lost ones in this world. Good job.
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