The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the title. What a perfect fit. I was a tad confused and aren't totally sure of your message. I also didn't see how the patient in the next bed was a female. You might see that in the ER but not on the floors.You had some great lines that made me giggle. I often name my IV pole too.I did end up reading the ending a few times and that helped clear some things up for me. As both an RN and a frequent patient I have an unique position of really knowing both sides of the bed.
06/14/12
Interesting story. Thank you.