The Official Writing Challenge
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This has a lovely rhythm and flows easily.

I often feel like I'm missing something when I read poems. I'm not 100 percent sure of your message. I do get there has been some kind of change. I did like the part about prayer. We often hear the least I can do is pray but actually it is the most one can do.
06/14/12
Good job. Thank you.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level two!