The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great piece. I really enjoyed the way you presented. I learned quite a bit. I must admit I tend to live in a little bubble. Thank you for opening my eyes.
This is a good article.

Just a couple of comments.
1. Line 2 should start with "too often.." not "two often..."

2. Some spacing between paragraphs would help with presentation.

3. Faithwriters rules state you must note which version of the bible you are quoting.

You have a talent for writing which will grow with experience and helpful feedback.

Keep up the good work.
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