The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/12
I loved how you summed up this powerful entry. With your touching testimony and heart loving comment. Great job. Thanks! God Bless~
I like the spin on this oft asked question. I felt like I was in your mind as it raced from topic to topic. It was sweet and innocent, almost child-like and since we must have the faith of a child it was quite appropriate and clever.

I did stop a bit at the foolish misguided women part. Though I would never choose abortion for myself I also wouldn't judge someone harshly for their mistakes. I will never know what kind of a horrible place a person must be in to make such a drastic decision.

I did enjoy your vision of what heaven would be like. I giggled about worrying about hurting someone's feelings. It's a great way to show how hard it is to visualize a place without hurt, jealousy or pain. You captured all of that in a clever way. Nicely done.
I thoroughly enjoyed this more then I can say. It truly touched my heart. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
Entertaining read. I've often wondered that same question Who would I first talk too. Have loads of questions so will just have to abide my time here until I get there:)
Good read
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