The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/12
Great job with the topic and the conflicting "students" I enjoyed this so much. And how fortunate for us in this forum, that believe. Praise God for opening our eyes and ears!

God bless~
I get the picture. "He who has an ear let him hear" Jeremiah 9:23-24 comes to my mind as I read your piece. Great job! Made me think. Blessings!
Well presented and written.
I thoroughtly enjoyed this article. I like the MC choose to be a believer in Christ. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
I think this is quite creative. I liked where you took me.

My only problem was the sudden introduction of Peter and James. I first thought you might have been talking about the apostles. As I read on I realized you probably weren't but still had no idea who they were.

You did a nice job of bringing the article full-circle and I always enjoy when a writer does that. You also have left me with some things to ponder.