The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/05
Very cute and a great comparison that there is someone for everyone. Thanks!
Wow, I really enjoyed this...and the hope it gives at the end! Good job!
11/02/05
Very nice message about patience!

Just a bit more work on counting out the meter, and this adorable poem will be perfect. Also, in the 2nd stanza, an apostrophe please, in "Patty's cologne."
11/02/05
What a beautiful poem! Keep up the good work:)
11/03/05
Cute, and fun to read, some poetic work and this is a good one.
11/03/05
I liked this. It read through like a breeze. Nice work! God bless ya, littlelight