The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, great story, well written.
Powerful! Amazingly penetrating, and filled with authenticity. Excellent job with this. Thank you.

God bless~
Poignant and moving. Well done and thanks for the message in this story.
Touching. God allows discomfort in our lives at times so we can come to valuable realisation.
A gripping story. I truly enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
This is really good. You did a great job of building the suspense and conflict right away. You really took me there too with the tat bubbles in the road. I remember pondering life when I was young that same way.
Congrats! God Bless~
Thank you everyone!
Congratulations on your ribbon and on ranking 21 overall!