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This is a great story that I'm sure many can relate to. The ending was perfect. What a great reminder to take our problems to God.
05/25/12
Powerful, poignant, and an all together thought provoking entry. The questions looming large at the end of the story were all relevant and within the boundaries of what one might ask in a situation like this. God is the one to run to for EVERYTHING! Amen. Good job.

Thank you. God Bless~
I can so relate to this story. Like the MC I ran to God and in his infinite mercy he heard my cry. Thank you for sharing and God bless and keep you.
Hi -

My heart aches for the many who are in unhappy marriages. There are numerous folks who can certainly relate to this story. It is the reality for scores of people.

But GOD...

He can bring the dead to life.
He can heal broken hearts.
He can cause resurrections of poor relationships.

I love that you ended this with a cry to our Lord for help. Yes, He's the answer to all...



05/30/12
Really well written and moving with a good ending.