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This poem really touched my heart. It easily could have been apiece that I wrote. The darkness is such a scary place to be in. My heart hurts for the MC. I know how easily is can be to slip from the light and back into the darkness. I want to reach through the screen and hug the MC and let the person know they are not alone. I'm here and understand that agony and am praying.
05/25/12
Powerful and gripping piece with a bundle of emotions soaring non stop. Excellent job of bringing the topic to life. My heart was with the MC all the way through.

Thank you for this.

God bless~
05/26/12
You've done an excellent job helping us to feel your MC's pain and hope. Truly, Jesus is the only One Who can ever be trusted with our hearts fully; all else are humanly flawed, no matter how badly they want to do what is right. Jesus heals, comforts, and accepts us as we are. His hand lifts us up out of the darkness and into His hope. Thanks for sharing this powerful piece.
A truly touching and beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
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Thank you for touching in such a comforting way!