The Official Writing Challenge
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I could relate to this piece. I wrote a story about an agoraphobic this week too. I think it is more common than one might think.

The only suggestion I might offer is I wanted more, I wanted to feel the panic.

I liked how the ending brought the poem full circle. We can do all things through christ who strengthens us!'-
05/25/12
Beautiful portrayal of the torment and anguish that courses through mind of an agoraphobic. Good job of taking us through as the MC pleads with the Lord for help.

Excellent job...and certainly on topic. Thank you.

God Bless~
An interesting article and right on point. Being held by fear of anything definitely is taking a risk, but God can overcome all fears. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
Congratulations for placing 7th in level two!