The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/12
This was a cute story, with a feel good aspect to it. Nicely done. And, well written. I enjoyed it. Thanks.

God Bless~
05/20/12
Nice! You might have been able to built up the suspense if you had her being found in a moment when she least expected it. Keep writing!
This is a lovely story. I liked how she was discovered. Now-a-days with shows like American Idol it's nice to see a story like this one.