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05/18/12
This was an incredible story. From beginning to the goosebump ending. I loved it. What an inventive and clever way to approach the topic at hand. Loved this! Great job. Thank you.

I loved how "Jesus joined them and clapped" for the Father! Perfect. Amen.

God bless~
05/18/12
Amen! Your story made me smile, and tugged at my heart.
This is beautiful. I do have goosebumps. Newman reminds me a lot of my mom. I think you did a fantastic job on bringing Newman to life. You delivered the message of love without coming off as preachy or sanctimonious. This is a great story.
Greetings -

This is a sweet precious and delightful read.

Thank you.
05/23/12
This is a beautiful story and very well written. A great message of how what we do now is perceived in heaven.
05/24/12
Congratulations! Nicely done. God Bless~
Congratulations on your beautiful ribbon and for ranking 11th overall! So close!
05/26/12
Daniel, I'm going to feature this on the Front Page showcase for the week of June 18. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
06/18/12
Daniel,I just posted your article in the showcase and I love it. We can make a difference one person at a time sharing the good news and loving the lost. Thank you for writing this. God Bless, Mike