The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/12
I always appreciate biblical references and scriptures in entries. This was a well written, and compelling piece. Well done.

God Bless~
05/20/12
This is a good devotional with a great (and much needed) lesson. The Bible references give the extra help if more study is wanted. Keep writing!
You did a nice jog of coming up with several examples to bring out your point in this essay.

It was difficult for me to stay involved in what you were saying. Perhaps if you were to focus on just one point and use not only Biblical references but examples that ordinary people who have not studied the Bible would relate to it might be relateable to more people.

I can tell you have a great passion for spreading the gospel. I really enjoyed the beginning about John the Baptist and could relate it to people today. I think it was a great idea to focus on him for this topic. Keep writing the words God places on your heart.