The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for this illustration. It is very inspirational, vivid, and alive.
11/02/05
I'd love to see a re-write of this without all of the questions to the reader, and the references to "you."

You've done a lovely job on the parts where you share your own experiences and your own faith journey. Thanks for writing!
11/02/05
Most of my points are covered above, you have a flare for the colorful, keep on working and your writing will move forward. Blessings - dub
11/02/05
Your making me hungry! The Lord is the smell of a home cooked meal, freshly laundered sheets, mopped linoleum, my husband's favorite cologne, and beautiful roses from my children on Mother's day all rolled up into one! Each blessing provided me with a new aroma of praise! Thanks for helping me count my bouquet of blessings with your sweet article:)
11/02/05
I read once about the seven wonders of the world--and the sense of smell being one of them.
I think that it's awesome the individual memories that fragrances bring to our hearts. And maybe that is the same with God and us. Your questions brought on thoughts. Thank you for sharing! Nice work. God bless ya, littlelight