The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful and touching devotion that speaks directly to the heart of any Christian. My heart delighted in this entry. Thank you.

God bless~
Yes, God's fame is not the same as the world's view of fame. I suggest leaving an extra space between paragraphs to help the reader. Keep writing!
This is a powerful piece, you give some great examples from the Bible in this piece.

The main thing I might suggest would be to focus on just 2 or 3 examples and expand what you are saying a bit to help the transition from one example to the next.

I like your take on the topic and think it is quite clever and original.