The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/12
Wow-powerful and strong depiction of a life without direction, or God. The last line said it all!

Good job. God Bless~
05/17/12
Wow again. Beautifully written to make a great point.
05/20/12
Sigh . . . sadly, that's how most of the world sees life. Well written!
This is a powerful piece. I believe it reflects many people who pursue fame at all costs. The only thing I might suggest is to be consistent throughout -either have punctuation everywhere it is needed. I like the effect of only capitalizing the word I it really brings your message home and makes it stand out even more.
05/22/12
I enjoyed your poem and its message.
05/24/12
Congratulations! Nicely done. God Bless~
05/24/12
Wow, what a powerful poem, what a powerful message. Very well deserving of its placing - congratulations. Love the unusual but incredible flowing rhythm of this.
05/24/12
The title says it all in this one. Great job. Congratulations!