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Thanks for sharing your wonderful memories with us of a much loved grandfather.
Brought back happy memories for me of mine.
I liked your style.
He must have led a very full and interesting life and I find it quite amazing that in spite of his ailment, he still kept going.
Good read with wonderful imagery.
Awwww. This touched me so much. I loved my grandpa too! You did a wonderful job detailing your interactions, while describing your grandpa. He seemed so full of life and love. Thank God for him and the memories you keep in your heart, until you meet him again in paradise.

Thank you for this moving tribute to a special man.

God Bless,

Very sweet and touching. It reminds me of my uncle, who was more like a grandpa to me and also suffered with emphysema. A wonderful tribute!
This is a lovely tribute to a wonderful man. Not being able to catch your breath wears you down in so many ways. I enjoyed this sweet piece.