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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Fragrance (10/24/05)

TITLE: Would You Recognize
By Juanita Pittman-Brown
10/26/05


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Would you recognize
The scent of goodness
In currents
On a sunny day --
Would you recognize
The scent of peace
Along your earthly way...

Would you recognize
The fragrant breeze
That carries hope
And love throughout
The air --
Would you recognize
The breeze of mercy
That shows you
How much others care...

Would you recognize
The air about
When it is filled
With hope
For future days --
Woud you recognize
The soft wind
Of compassion
In others' deeds
And ways...

Would you recognize
The wind that blows
Understanding upon
The shore of your life --
Would you recognize
Patience when you
Are in a struggle
And sense urgent strife...

Would you recognize
The breeze
Across the ocean blue
That carries with it
Perfection of our Lord --
Would you recognize
The wind of grace
As expressed in God's
Word as your reward...

It is for sure
That to recognize
The air which
Blows from heaven's way
You first must acknowledge
Who created the wind
Earth sky and day...


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Jan Ackerson 11/02/05
This has a very peaceful rhythm. Thank you.
dub W11/02/05
Even free verse must have rhythm, all of the elements are here, with a little tweaking this will work well.
blessings - dub
Garnet Miller 11/02/05
I hope I would recognize the smell of goodness, although sometimes the pressures of life snuff them out. Thanks for reminding us all to be on the lookout for something wonderful:)
Nina Phillips11/02/05
I agree with dub. I noticed at the end a little tweak--was the commas separating three words. Other than that good job! God bless ya, littlelight