The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
Absolutely delightful! I envisioned every line and fell in love with Dandy, myself!
Cathy
05/04/12
Awwww...I loved this! I am such an animal lover, and so happy that it ended on a happy note, I was so worried that it would not! But thank heavens it did. LOL.

This was so well written and so entertaining that it could be in a children's magazine, or made into a book "The adventures of Dandy"

Loved it, and a clever direction with the topic this week.

God Bless~
05/05/12
This was delightful! Loved every single word of it!

Great job!
05/05/12
Ha! Loved it. I fell in love with Dandy, but it was Chico, who stole my heart.
I absolutely love this! It was fun and light-hearted and such a clever and original take on the topic.

My only complaint is instead of 3:00 which my mind read as three o'clock you should have just put three for the rhyme.

But other than that I thought it was close to perfect. It would make a delightful picture book and is one of my all time favorites,
WOW! I truly loved this. An outstanding piece of writing and I fell in love with Dandy. I loved the ending. Thank you for sharing and God bless.