The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
Loved the title, loved the ending and loved everything in between.
Really good and creative writing!
Cathy
05/04/12
Wow - simply amazing piece of writing. Loved the story and the powerful message that the MC received during the middle of the story...and, I loved how the topic was presented in such a clever fashion.

A well crafted and altogether enjoyable entry.

Thank you.

God Bless~
05/05/12
Oh, I truly enjoyed this!

Thanks for the reminder of counting all my blessings!
I really enjoyed this. I found myself quickly caught up in the story and was peering at the screen like one might on a snowy day in a car. You brought the story to Loire fro me. I liked the ending and didn't see it coming. You put a fresh, creative take on the usual overused dream bit and it worked really well. This was a great read beginning to end.
05/08/12
This is such a beautiful, beautiful story and a reminder for us to realize what true wealth is.
I loved your story and the title fit like a glove. Everything tied up in a beautiful package and so eloquently delivered. Thank you and God bless.