The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/12
I loved this story of friendship, love and faith in our Lord. The two MC's were placed together for a reason, God has plans for all interactions in life, and this was no different.

Good job and excellent writing. Thank you.

GOD Bless~
05/08/12
Just lovely. I enjoyed the influence Megan had on Julie.
This is a great story. I loved how the MC didn't judge her new friend or force her way upon her. Instead she showed her love by her actions. Sometimes my husband tells the kids do what I say and not what I do. Oh it irritates me because as humans, especially kids, we are much more prone to mimic actions. You showed that lesson nicely here.
05/10/12
Wow! I almost missed this, so very glad I didn't! I loved this!

What a powerful message, on so many levels; the father's wisdom in introducing the two women, Megan's strength of character, and the power in living a truly chaste life is a reminder that our own lifestyles should influence those around us.

Great work!