The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/12
Thank you for this lovely entry that spoke volumes. Lovely message...God bless~
05/05/12
Oh, I enjoyed this so much. Short, but oh so sweet and true!

Loved this!
05/07/12
How very true what you have written. Short but very touching. Thank you and God bless.
05/08/12
This is a well-written little piece that gets right to the heart of the matter.

When writing a piece this short, you may want to shorten some of the sentences. For example the first sentence in the third paragraph is quite long. Also make sure you cite the verse where it comes from and what translation of the Bible you quoted.

I think it was quite clever that you showed how rich can mean deepening. I've read most of the stories this week and this is the first one that looked at the topic in that way. It was a pleasure to read.
05/08/12
Wonderfully stated. An enthusiastic "Amen!" for the wisdom you have expressed in this piece.