The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/12
A great message. Too often Christians judge fellow believers by past sins and mistakes, even when those individuals have confessed those sins and repented. Glad the ladies made a wise decision.
04/28/12
I loved this story...Nicely told. I especially loved this part: "Goodness, if we took past mistakes into account, I don’t think we’d even be able to find a speaker." That said it all! No need to go any further after that. Great line.

Thanks for this story with a powerful message. Good Job.

God Bless~
This is a good story about so many different topics, judging, gossip, forgiveness, letting the past go. I think it will touch different people in different ways.

The only thing I questioned was when Joyce wrote a letter about her affair. It was hard to know if Joyce had the affair and was the speaker or if Joyce was talking about the speaker.

You did a nice job with the ending. Where you added another important message, pay attention to your own problems before you start worrying about others. Nice job.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level two!
05/03/12
Yay, thank you.