The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a perfect poetic rendition of the Genesis chapter 18-19 story!

Sad to say, a position we often find ourselves in even today, tempted to "Look Back" at our old lives, but this story reminds us of what happens when we do.

Great job! Here's my "Two Thumbs Up!"
A brilliant job with the topic at hand...and a powerful reminder of "not looking back" - This familiar Bible account is a present day testimony for all Christians alike.

Nicely done. God Bless~
This is quite powerful. Though there have been several stories this week about Lot and his wife, you tackled it from a different angle. I thought the ending was perfect and was haunted by the repeating almost saved but not quite.
FaithWriters hug and congratulations!

Wing His Words!
Congratulations on winning 1st place. Very beautifully written!
Congratulations on your beautiful blue ribbon and for placing 20th overall!