The Official Writing Challenge
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
11/02/05
This really hit its stride in the second half, but I think you could omit the last paragraph; the Shakespeare quote has another context altogether and doesn't really add to the meaning of your devotional.

I love the phrase "...emanating sweetness from my soul..." Beautiful!
11/02/05
This is a very good study, and you really had my interest until the 5th. paragraph when the whole mood shifted to 2nd. person. Perhaps, either eliminate the paragraph or restate it would make this viable.
blessings - dub
11/02/05
I liked this lesson alot. Beautiful, thanks for sharing it so well.
God bless ya, littlelight