The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/12
My heart goes out to the MC and the children. This entry will speak volumes to many in this kind of situation. Praise God that He showed you a way out,and gave you the strength to do so.

This was a well written and compelling story and I thank you for sharing it with us.

God Bless you~
This is a powerful testimonial. My heart hurts for all the couples and their children who have to go through something like this.

I noticed your spacing was off, that can happen if you copy and paste a story. It will get rid of the double-spacing and split sentences. Try to always hit preview before submit so you can see what it looks like to the reader. A trick to prevent you from hitting submit by accident, before you're ready is leave the level and title space blank until you have looked at it by the preview button. It won't accept your story without the level entered.

You did a nice job taking me through your feelings of standing at the altar in love to the bitter end then to the Godly end. Nicely done.