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Praise the Lord for showing her the way. Loved the last line of this well written story. Good job with this.
God Bless~
Great message, I pray more young women learn to set "healthy boundaries" like this MC did. Thanks for sharing this!
This is a different Easter story for sure. It held my attention throughout. I liked how you showed the subtle bit of Tonia's personality and that maybe her boyfriend needed to grow up, but it seemed she did too. That's a great way of showing a message instead of just telling it.
Thank you for an interesting story. I enjoyed this very much.