The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/12
Wow - this was a powerful and heart wrenching saga. It was well written and touched my heart. Excellent job. Thank you.

God Bless~
04/15/12
Great work! Very good job of showing and not telling! Powerful message... I loved it!
04/15/12
Wow this is intense and breaks my heart. I'm not sure if it is based on a true story or not but I suspect it might be. So many people wrote of Easter this week, I commend you for writing this out of the box gripping story. You held my attention all the way through. The ending is powerful.
04/19/12
What a powerful heart wrenching story. My heart broke for the young woman in the story. Thank you for sharing.
04/19/12
Congratulations & God Bless~
04/19/12
Congratulations on your EC Happy Dance!
04/19/12
Awesome article and you won! Great and well-deserved with this terrific and moving piece. If you look out the window before going to bed tonight, you might just see me swimming up the Gulf, carrying a flag I am bringing you, "Champion"; I'm leaving right away. Congrats!
04/19/12
Congratulations! You are moving up in the world! A well-written piece picturing life's blood, sweat and tears. Blessings!