The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/12
Oh my heavens...so beautiful. This touched my heart and made it smile.
Brilliant poem. Loved it.
God Bless~
04/15/12
Oh! I absolutely loved this! So touching and poignant! Great job!
This is beautiful. I can really relate to poems that start off in a seemingly dark place. That is how mine often are too. But the great news is there is a beautiful light at the end. No matter how alone we feel how wonderful that Jesus is always near.
04/15/12
This has a great message. I think many people can relate to the feelings you expressed so well. So glad Jesus is the answer! Thanks for writing this.
What a beatiful and touching poem. It reminded me of my life before and after. Thank you for sharing such a lovely poem.
04/19/12
What a wonderful message and take on the topic. I like the way it started with a pity party and led up to Jesus. Excellent!
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level 2!