The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice rememberance, A couple of things, limit your use of exclamation points - ! indicates a very high level, hard to go anywhere from there but down. Also, and elipsis is three dots... Otherwise, I could smell the cookies in your writing ;)
blessings - dub
Lovely, a nice look at how traditions start. I'm sure you didn't mean to end with a comma. Don't you wish there was an "uh-oh" button?
It's fun to create new holiday traditions. It keeps everyone involved. Nice story:)
That was interesting, and went right along with the title. Me, like Jan--wish there was an uh-oh button. Nice story! God bless ya, littlelight
Now I'm starting to feel all christmassy! The first sentance is a little bit awkward - something like 'the little snow covered cottage on the hillside' might read more easily. Otherwise, very warm and sweet piece. God bless.