The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/12
Wow, this is a powerful story. Well told, even though a sad tear-jerker.
03/19/12
This is a tear-jerker. You ended it differently than where I thought you were going but it worked. Nice writing!
03/21/12
Awww...This touched me so much. Oh my gosh, it was so poignant and beautiful.

Thank you for touching my heart with this well written entry.

God Bless~
03/22/12
A hearty Congratulations!
God Bless you~