The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like your message. It is true, all of our achievements are for naught without Jesus. He is the one who should get all of the glory.

Tiny red ink - In one sentence you wrote i like my grandparent and there should be commas around the phrase like my grandparents.

You did a nice job of staying on topic while delivering a poignant message.
03/18/12
This is a good lesson for all of us. Many restaurant owners display their first dollar earnned in a frame at the cashier's counter, while others have it in the largest frame in their own office to remind them that there was a time of beginning and just Who has helped them all along the way. Thanks for this article and nice job.
03/21/12
Well written and well said. Amen! I loved this important and profound message. Powerful and yet subtle at once.

Thank you so much.
God Bless~