The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some really good points in your mini sermon. I might encourage you to focus on just one or two verses at a time to not overwhelm the reader. Your words will reach the hearts of others and your message is a good one.
03/19/12
You have great information here but maybe too much for 750 words. Try to use more illustrations to keep your reading engaged. I think that would help lots. Thank you for sharing!
03/21/12
What better forum to bring forth the "Word" than through writing?

Nice job of bringing forward a message that never gets old. Good job with this.

Thank you for this.
God Bless you~