The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely poem. The rhymes and rhythm were great.
03/18/12
This is a beautiful poem. I cannot offer any helpfyl tips to make it better because I know nothing about writing poetry, but I can tell you I liked this poem a lot. Thanks!
03/21/12
So beautiful...Lovely job.
Thank you for this touching poem. God Bless~