The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/12
I loved the way you completed this story. This is a very good illustration which a child could even understand. Good job!
03/15/12
I love this article! I'm going to read it to my kids at the Children's Center... so full of little pebbles that no one thinks can amount to much. Wonderfully written. Thanks!
03/16/12
This was a really good story that I could easily see in a "children's magazine" or as a "children's book bedtime story." Nicely done.

Thank you.

God Bless~
Thanks! I really enjoyed this!