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This is a sweet story. I wanted more details though. But that's a good thing when the reader wants more. It's not easy to run into an old friend when differences have separated you. You did a nice job showing the discomfort.
03/09/12
Ahh, the face of forgiveness. 'Tis sweet relief to the soul.

Good story. (I hope you have a sequel in mind. Would love to see Ivy and Shannon in the future.)
03/09/12
Excellent story with such realistic dialogue. Great job of showing internal conflicts from boths sides.

Well done. God Bless~
Loved the title and the story was wonderful. Beautiful dialogue between Shannon and Ivy. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
03/15/12
Congratulations!

Blessings~
Congratulations for your 2nd place win and for5 ranking 14th overall!
03/18/12
Aww! An article with huge amounts of truth. The past is the past. Forgiveness is healing, and love turns up the corners of your mouth. Good job!