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This is a sweet story. I wanted more details though. But that's a good thing when the reader wants more. It's not easy to run into an old friend when differences have separated you. You did a nice job showing the discomfort.
Ahh, the face of forgiveness. 'Tis sweet relief to the soul.

Good story. (I hope you have a sequel in mind. Would love to see Ivy and Shannon in the future.)
Excellent story with such realistic dialogue. Great job of showing internal conflicts from boths sides.

Well done. God Bless~
Loved the title and the story was wonderful. Beautiful dialogue between Shannon and Ivy. Thank you for sharing and God bless.

Congratulations for your 2nd place win and for5 ranking 14th overall!
Aww! An article with huge amounts of truth. The past is the past. Forgiveness is healing, and love turns up the corners of your mouth. Good job!