The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/12
You put alot of emotion in this one. I could feel the pain but I could feel the trust building too. Good job describing those emotions.
03/09/12
I simply loved this entry. Wonderful heart and soul in this entire piece. It stirred my emotions. Thank you so much.

My favorite line: "...but if we focus on Jesus, with the upsweep of His hand, He can calm our fiercest storm."

God Bless you~
03/09/12
Such a beautiful, tender emotion filled entry. It tugged on my heart strings and I could feel the pain. Thank you and God bless.
03/15/12
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 2!