The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/12
What a Savior we have. I'm so glad you know Him and know how to share Him.
03/02/12
Simply beautiful job with this hauntingly lovely poem. I thought it was wonderful from beginning to end. Great job. Thank you.

God Bless~
This is beautiful. You captured my emotions so well I wonder if you have been peeking in my brain. I noticed a tiny typo thurst instead of thirst. The poem starts out with such despair but as he minute we spend with Jesus the despair turns to hope. Beautiful.