The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/12
Wow - this left me with tears in my eyes. This was some story. I loved the entire thing.

The ending although so sad,it was beautiful that she had read the letter prior to going home to the Lord.

Thank you for this story...it blessed me.

God Bless~
I enjoyed this heart-felt letter. I smile when I think of some of the teachers who have impacted me over the years.

Since it's in a letter format, you don't need the quotes at the start of each paragraph, putting them just when someone else talked would be fine. If you wrote a letter you wouldn't put the quotes in like that.

I thought that the letter writing was a creative take on the topic. Not only did you talk about how the teacher encouraged the MC, but the letter itself is a form of encouragement to both the teacher and the MC. This is fresh and inspirational.
Good job. I would like to say more but the tears are getting in my way.