The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/12
Beautiful job! Wow - what a well written story filled with a wonderful message.

Loved the ending. Great job.

God Bless~
03/01/12
Grief is an odd thing. It is handled differently by every person. Jennifer comforted best with her prayers, her presence and her tears. You showed this beautifully.
This is lovely. Spot on topic. Prayer is the best form of encouragement there is.
Very good insight on grief, especially the need to 'just be there.' A wonderful teaching tool for grief counselors and groups.

I did question the POV. At first I thought the MC was the one grieving and then it changed to the friend. A bit of tidying and it would even be better.

Good job.