The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/12
Beautiful job! Wow - what a well written story filled with a wonderful message.

Loved the ending. Great job.

God Bless~
03/01/12
Grief is an odd thing. It is handled differently by every person. Jennifer comforted best with her prayers, her presence and her tears. You showed this beautifully.
03/03/12
This is lovely. Spot on topic. Prayer is the best form of encouragement there is.
03/08/12
Very good insight on grief, especially the need to 'just be there.' A wonderful teaching tool for grief counselors and groups.

I did question the POV. At first I thought the MC was the one grieving and then it changed to the friend. A bit of tidying and it would even be better.

Good job.