The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/12
What a lovely piece! I felt your heart in this, and love your honesty. Your candor helped lend a credibility and vulnerability to the story. I agree with the entire entry. Things are so different today.

Wonderful job with this.
Thank you...It touched me.

God bless you~
03/03/12
This is an interesting essay. I really could feel and understand the points you were making.

Try not to mention the topic or contest when you are writing as not all readers may be familiar with FW or the weekly challenge.

I think you did a nice job writing on topic. I could feel your passion and desire to spread the Good News in your words.
03/09/12
My heart also beats with a passion to awaken a slumbering church that has forgotten to carefully follow God's way, especially in leading the nations to know Him. And, as for the young people of today, you are so right, we have failed them! We are told that 80% of the church's young people will leave the church when they go to college. Tragic!
Good job!