The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for this touching and heart warming story. I loved it. It grabbed my was poignant and so well written. I loved it.
Thanks for sharing.

God Bless you.
This is a great story and has so many truths in it. It was spot on topic.

Try to work on more showing and less telling. Instead of using passive verbs like was or is use action words. For example I was a preacher. Just changing it a little like. For thirty years, I preached in many churches. Also instead of saying you look forward to feedback show it instead. My stomach quivered with excitement while nerves twitched in my hands as I unfolded the first note. Paint a picture with your words.

Your story is perfect, not only for the topic, but for the challenge as well. It's wonderful to receive the fluff comments. They make me feel good. But I also enjoy the corrective comments. Those have helped me become a better writer. You did an outstanding job with this.
Congratulations! God Bless~
Congratulations on both your win and making the E.C. list! A very touching story.
Congratulations and welcome to Level 3!
I really enjoyed your story - a roundabout way of showing encouragement.
Congratulations on the win! Great story!
Absolute in it's content, Absolute in it's truth... I love it.

Thank you for sharing.