The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/12
Oh, the tender touch of the Master's hand. Our sinful mistakes can't be too great for His forgiving power. Well demonstrated in this excellent story.
02/23/12
Aw, I love your humorous-to-serious approach here. I was laughing one moment, down the next. Nice little surprise ending you finished it off with.
02/23/12
I could see this as an actual novella...It was that good. Nice job, tense moments and light hearted ones made for a interesting and sweet story.

Thanks. God Bless~
02/26/12
This is a sweet story. One thing I've learned this week is that life in general is one huge experiment.
02/27/12
That sure left my head spinning. Good Job!
02/29/12
Excellent read. Life is an experiment. One of learning and growing in the Lord. Thank you and God bless.
03/03/12
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level two!