The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/12
Wow! I really enjoyed this whole entry. You did a great job of speculating as to what Isaac may have been feeling and thinking. I have read stories from Abraham's point of view, never from Isaacs.

Excellent job with this!
Thank you so much.

God Bless~
02/24/12
I, like C.D., have never considered this story from Isaac's viewpoint. Issac was probably an older teen and could have fought Abraham, but his trust, like Abraham's, was in God, and God didn't fail either one of them. Good job.
I enjoyed this take on the story of Abraham. You did a nice job of getting into the son's head, Make sure you capitalize Father when using it as a name. The last line seemed almost like a different voice than the rest of the story. I agree with that statement wholeheartedly and often need to be reminded of it.
I loved how you turned the story around and used Isaac. You did an outstanding job. Thank you for sharing and God bless.