The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/12
Oh my gosh! I have tears streaming down my face. This was so beautiful and so heartwrenching. Wow!

Powerful, poignant - and a beautiful ending as He goes to His new home in heaven.

Great job. Thank you-this story touched me so much.

God Bless you~
02/16/12
Oh gosh! I can't wait! I hope there is no one I'm waiting for when my Lord sends for me. Just let me go to my divine appointment ASAP!
Wonderful read!
What a beatuful story. I am still crying. This touched my heart in so many ways. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
02/17/12
Very real, very touching and very true. I know the dying can resist due to some unfinished business in their lives and we can actually hold our love one here by being afraid to release them to the Heavenly Father. You shared beautifully. Thanks
This is a good story. I believed when my mom died, she too waited for me to get there. I believe God allowed her to hold on out of his love for me. I so get the glow part. Theologians may argue when the spirit leaves the body but I have no doubt. The glow knows.
02/19/12
Oh my! That gave me goosebumps. Beautiful story...well written!
02/19/12
Oh wow. This is beautiful. Didn't even notice any of the "errors" you mentioned. Great job.
Wonderfully woven between heaven and earth. Powerful, poignant and precious. You blessed me.
02/23/12
Congratulations! God Bless~