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02/16/12
Nice job with the topic...Beautiful messages sprinkled throughout the story. I enjoyed this. Thank you. God Bless~
I loved your story. It had a good message to all. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
02/17/12
Thanks for sharing your article. It is on topic and very interesting. The most important appointment of our lives and only God knows when we need to be there. I think that helps me remember to be ready at all times.
I enjoyed this devotion. You did a nice job showing examples from life and then moved on to your message.

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The prayer was really lovely. Though many have written similar stories this week, most quoted the verse in Hebrews. It was nice to see you make your point using a different scripture.
02/22/12
I thought this was very creative...a mixture of prose and poetry. And who could not appreciate the topic, the coming of Jesus. We do have a wonderful appointment to look forward to...
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level two!