The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh how sweet! I loved this. Happy endings, and romance- my kind of story. It was adorable without being "sappy"- Great job.
God bless~
A beautiful romantic story with a happy ending and it covered this weeks topic perfectly. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
That was a nice read. I liked your title too.
This is a sweet story. I really like the characters.

In the beginning you forgot some end quotes and it was difficult to follow who was talking.

The ending, though slightly predictable was really sweet. I loved how you showed her anxiety. The message if we work to please God we will please others is a powerful one.
I love this Martha, from the title on down the page.

Good writing! And I am not just saying that.