The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/12
Nice job with the topic. This was a beautiful message and well written. God Bless~
I love the title. It hits me in the head. I rush around and arrive right on time all thanks to God. It was right on target. Thanks for sharing and God bless.
02/17/12
Nicely written poem with a good message. Thanks for sharing.
Did you write this about me?
This is really lovely and I could totally relate.
At times the rhymes seemed a tad forced and the rhythm off a tad but I know how hard it is to master those things. Your message was beautiful and one I really need to be reminded of.